This is the third part to Anna Halford’s “The Season – First Entry“
Part 2 can be found at SJB Writing
“Fill it” Kyle gestured to the holdall.
He had minutes before someone called the cops. Or played hero. He hoped that didn’t happen. He didn’t want to shoot anyone at any time, least of all at Christmas.
A cocked hammer at his ear informed him there was no time like the present.
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Ouch! Oh what a shame! I had hoped for a ‘happy’ ending. What about the children? Dinner? Coats? Oooo! You nasty man!! (I get carried away with these brilliant pieces!)
Haven’t finished yet, there’s still a fifth part for someone to pen? Whose going to end it?
Here’s a happy ending instead:
Kyle’s youngest gasped at the loot nestling under the tree.
“Daddy, Santa DID come! How does he do it?”
Her father scooped her up.
“Magic. But he does have help.” he replied.
“Elves and pixies?”
“More like Smith & Wesson” he chuckled at her frown.
“And they rarely have time off.”
Ooooh, this is getting very dramatic! On edge of seat now!
Do you want to finish it, snaggle? Part 5 should be the finale.
OK, you’re on!
Snaggle, this one really needs an ending:
Decisions (Part 5)
http://ventahl.wordpress.com/2012/01/01/5050-word-assignment-week-24-the-season-part-4/
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